User blog comment:Hitsuji Mamoru/FGO-style Servant Creation Room/@comment-30314236-20170120190955/@comment-30121804-20170121030821

A truly great story!! I can really feel the fierce of Mulan Legend in your writing. And here you said that you aren't too skill at writing description, you are too humble, Shikifan.

Just a wonder, I don't really read about Mulan, but I had seen a Disney's animation adaptation of the legend. In that, I remember the Great Wall had fail to stop the invader, resulting in Mulan's venture. So, bring the Great Wall back seem like not very suitable. Beside, if Mulan already has the Great Wall, then what NP will Shin Shi Huang has?

Don't get me wrong, I don't want to mean anything rude to you, Shikifan. These just some of my opinions, that all.