Talk:Artoria Pendragon (Archer)/@comment-27875522-20171116023205

I made an attempt at translating her 2nd NP line. I used rikaikun to translate individual words, check the google translation, and came up with something plausible. I'll detail the entire process, so someone with actual JP knowledge can just correct my mistakes.

スイミング ！  is "swimming!" This part is easy since it's just katakana version of the english word.

　華麗、あまりにも華麗 isn't too bad either. 華麗, according to rikaikun, means "splendor" or "magnificence." あまりに means "too much" or "excessive." Altogether, this part means "Magnificent, too magnificent!"

帆柱と散れ is a little more difficult... 帆柱 would mean "mast,"  と is a particle with a lot of uses and " 散れ" could mean "fall," "disperse," or even "die a noble death." This part is pretty unclear to a novice like me, so I'll just translate it as "die a noble death" directed to the mast.

『 陽光煌めく勝利の剣エクスカリバー・ヴィヴィアン』is the easy part. Basically, the katakana part is " Excalibur Vivian" and the mainly-kanji section is  "''Sword of Sunlight-Glitter Victory." ''This part I'm really confident about!

So, putting it all together, we get "Swimming! Magnificent, too magnificent! Mast, die a noble death! Excalibur Vivian!" Would anyone be willing to help me fix the middle part, and any other mistakes I've made?