Thread:Valeth/@comment-30314236-20181006182108/@comment-34364075-20181113101236

Well, not the plot. More like explanations of the plot =w=

Like jumping from prologue to climax without building the tension first? Or somewhere along that line. All the major plotlines were intact, but there were confusing moments about side characters who suddenly appear for a few minutes and disappear without explanation, for example.