User blog comment:Hitsuji Mamoru/FGO-style Servant Creation Room/@comment-28209103-20170203173536/@comment-4802891-20170204184331

You might be "bad at making female" characters (which I find isn't true), but you are sure good at making good romantic stories with, as you pointed out yourself, a lot of symbolism. And poetry.

I'm not good enough with these stuff to give a proper advice on those two characters. What you achieved is certainly fantastic, as seeing how I'm all "wow" reading it, but as I said earlier I can't compute something like this fully. It reminds me where is my place, that's for sure.

Keep the good work going, that's all I'm going to say.