Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-36708952-20180826214137

So I am here with another servant idea I would love to hear your opinions and responses to my idea, and I thank you for taking time to look at my concept.

Avenger

Name:Bloody Mary

Age: Undisernable

Gender: Female

Alignment: Chaotic Evil

Noble phantasms: The kingdom of Blood, Tower of London (Only usable within Britan, creates the torturous prision the tower of London as a possible fortress/Territory for use).

Bio: Mary Tudor was a queen that ruled for a short time period over britan, she had a terrifying hatred for protestants and excuted them along with anyone that spoke out against her rule on a daily basis, her reign was known to be the bloodiest of any monarch its said that she even was more terrifying that Vlad. Her goal was to return the religion of England back to Catholic with the hopes that England can return to being one of the kingdoms religiously under Rome and the papalcy. However the people led a revolt by freeing Princess Elizibeth from the tower of London who brought about her demise. As a servant this is an incarnation after her death a vengeful and broken spirit that seeks to bloody up the world as she sees fit.

Passives

Avenger A+: Reduces party debuff resistance except herself

Oblivion Correction C: Increases Critical Damage.

Wraith EX: At the end of every turn deal 500 damage to all enemies and heal 250 hp to her for every enemy affected. (In real life this skill allows her to drain the mana of opposing servants just by being nearby them but not enough to inhibit their powers only to make her more dangerous as the fight progresses)

Skills

Tudor B: Increases party's attack (20%-40%) at the cost of her own HP (200-1000)

Vengence: Debuffs enemies defence (5%-10%), Crit rate (20%-30%) and has a chance to reduce np charge (10%-15% chance).

Mirror in the Dark: Grants evasion (3 times) and np gain (10-20%).

Deck: She has a quick/arts deck with two quick, two arts and an arts Noble phantasm.

Noble Phantasm :The Kingdom of blood (Reign of Holy Tyranny)

Rank: ???

Class: ???

In its nature this noble phantasm is both Mary's greatest strength but also her greatest weakness. After being summoned Mary is hardly a servant and more just like a powerful wraith that cant materialise properly. But if she feeds off the blood of humans or is just in the vicinity of death she can draw on the dead to materialise her body further. Her noble phantasm is formless as its entire nature changes based on how much of Mary is materialised she can also change it at will to suit her needs, the only classes of Noble phantasm she can't morph her NP to is Anti-Divinity, Anti-World, Anti-Evil and Anti-Sovereign. Note that using her np for too long will force her to dematerialize again and be forced to feed on death again to reach combat capacity.

In game

Deal damage to all enemies and has a chance to provide a variety of buffs to herself based on overcharge.

Guts to herself for 1 turn (40%-60% chance based on overcharge)

Debuff immunity (30%-50% chance based on overcharge)

Regeneration (500hp for 2 turns) (60%-100% chance based on overcharge)

Arts performance (20% increase) (50%-90% chance based on overcharge.

Anyway this is Bloody Mary I would love to hear your thoughts and opinions below. 