Talk:Astraea/@comment-35301270-20190428061316/@comment-35301270-20190428122211

Yeah I dunno why shift enter doesn't space it out if you don't do it twice, its pretty dumb and make the text look. I edited and fixed it.

I disagree with a lot of what you've said and I'll visually mark which parts of the art looks bad.

1 - The left biscep is literally smaller than the right biscep even though the left biscep is in front of her and closer to the viewer.

2 - Yeah was probably typing too fast and didn't click preview, my bad on that one.

3 - Yeah I can see that now, still not appealing when it connects to a much smaller biscep.

4 - I guess but it doesn't look very good with the overall colors and design.

5 - Even if it's proportionally correct, what is even happening there? The leg looks like its poiting outward to the side, but then it turns to face forward at the ankle? That's incredibly uncomfortable if it is and if not, what am I even looking at? Also the dip near the knee makes sense if its pointing out to the side, but then it conflicts with the dip at the heel because your calf would naturally curve into the heal, not go straight down then suddenly curve inwards and then out to the heel. I either have no idea what I'm looking at, or I do and its terrible.

6 - Yes the human arm does get wider after the elbow, however her forearm nearly doubles the size of her biscep. I'm fairly certain that the forearm isn't supposed to be nearly double the size of her biscep.

Along with all of the weird angles, curves, art style and clashing colors, the 2nd and 3rd art looks really bad coming from this artist. Staring at it made it worse for me, I just cant unnotice all the weird/bad decisions the artist made with this one. The 1st art looks fine and I love the 4th art, he did great at them and I'm not trying to say he's bad as I really like Mothman's art. But this just feels like he drew something out and didn't go back over it to fix any problems that the art has. Not to mention this artist did really bad at illustrating Luvia in everything but the 4th art as well.